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`vqf / nti EtDmf kAr (16/10/2001)    Read Comments    Published version @ Thinnai.com

Mtlf Etti cmfpqkfkar[i[f cnfEtaxmvqf.
cil Enrgfkqilf cnfEtaxmakv<mf,
cil Enrgfkqilf cgfkItmakv<mf,
pl Enrgfkqilf,
`Dtft tvA]kfkayf
;gfEk '[f ;ty YMAlyil udfkarfnftiRpfpvqf.

'[fA[ kdnfT EpaKmf 'vqavT
'[f kv[mf citbFkfAkyilf,
oR Mylf KdfFyayf
YMAlyiliRnfT OF vRvaqf.
*Eh, parftftaya?*
'[fA[pf EpalEv `vqf '[fpaqf.
u[fA[pf Epal EvebaRvrf
;lfAlyF ep]fE].
mlrfkqf 'lflamf m]mf vICmfta[f.
(~[alf) '[kfka[ (C)vacmf nI taE[.
'[fbivAq udfkarcf ecalflividfD
Evbidmf nkrfnfT EpaEv[f.

'tirfpDmf k]gfkqilf
;ylfpayf pzKAkyilf
cbfBmf u]ra cnftrfpfp epaZTkqilf,
cbfEbbkfKAby
;vQkfK Etaziyayf epaRnfTvaEqa `vqf?
cwfclmf eka]fEd cbfB nita[ikfAkyilf...
p>kfkqf parfkfk vRpvA[ parftfT
pbikfk vRkibaE[a?
ptbi OFyvrf plrf.
kAl Mtlf kylf vAr.

'lfla pimfpgfkAqy<mf epaRtftipf parftfT,
'Tv<mf u[kfEkbfb matiriyilfAl '[fEb,
TAdtfT `zitfT,
;[f{mf Pd
EtFkf eka]fFRkfkiEb[f ep]fE]
u[kfka[ EtaziAy.

'A[ `zikfKmf p<Ak
uqfqiRkfKmf uA[ etadamlf ecyfy
EvEbTmf vziyiRkfkibta
EyacitfTkf eka]fFRkfkiEb[f.

'pfpF ;Rpfpaqf,
u[kfKqfEq KcfC vID kdfF
KFyiRkfKmf `vqf?
+cimfr[a, ciEnkava+ cI]fFpf parfkfKmf ciEnkitrfkqf.

'pfpF ecalfEv[da?

'pfepaZT uqf NAznftaqf?
'[kfK criyak wapkmilfAl.
pr]f Emlf ;RkfKmf pAzy epdfFyilf,
'[f ~cae[aRvrf Etrfv< `AdkatfT MdfAdyidfd,
uAdnfTvid tyarak ;RkfKmf,
pZtft evqfAqtftaqilf ta[f
kiBkfkiytayf wapkmf.
`tilf EttiyidfFRpfEp[f ;lfAlya?
;R parfkfkiEb[f.
`dda, MFvakcf ecalfl MFyvilfAlEy?
`nft EttikfK M[fpa, pi[fpa?
;nft EttikEq ;pfpFtfta[f.
kaxfmIrf 'lfAlkfEkadfFlf
;nftiypfpKti 'gfkiRnfT etadgfKkibT
'vralfta[f ecalfl MFy<mf?
cri, cmata[ EkadfAdpfEpalf
na[f kiBkfkiy naqiliRnfEt etadgfKEvamf.

Vriy{kfEk patmf CDmf oR EkaAd.
Cdfd pzmayf ma pZtftiRkfk,
Cbfbemlflamf `At `BtfT,
PAdkAq nirpfpikf eka]fFRnftarfkqf.
EcamfEpbiyayf na[f mdfDmf
oR kiAqyilf pDtftiRnfEt[f.
`nft Kyil Etapfp< vziyayf
oR kiqi Ackfkiqf ;bkfAk kdfF pbnfTEpa[T.
kAdkfkarrf ep]f '[fEb wapkmf.

u[kfka[ Mtlf vitfT, `Tev[fEb wapkmf.
;pfpF parfpfpvridemlflamf,
urmf 'DtfTpf EpadfD
viZTvidfd ~lmrmayf
viAqnfTvidfdayf '[f{qf.

;r]fdayf Epa[ vazfkfAk.
;ylfp< o[fbayf,
'tirfparfpfp< o[fbayf.
'Tvri{mf "bfBkfekaqfEv[f.
`TvAr ;nftkfk[v<kqf prmCkmf.

`tikaAlpf epaZtilf
`niyaymayf '[f T\kfkmf kAlpfpvqf nI.
;pfpF Mtftcf Ecvlf Pvitfta[f
nmf epaZT viFy<em[ilf,
na[f ;[f{mf ekawfc Enrmf
T\gfKvtayf nFkfkiEbE[?
na[f k]f vizikfKmf vAr
Ecvlf Pvata '[f[?

ulk `vcrtfti[f
oR Tqiy<mf `biya, ciB KznfAtyayf
ematftmf YMF nI T\gfKAkyilf,
Mkmf mdfDmf EparfAv vilkfki,
j[f[LkfK uqfEqy<mf, evqiEyy<mf ecvfva[mf,
~yirmf obfBAmkqf,
kviAtkqayf 'Ztivid madfEd[a '[f[?

Pviy Ecvlf KFkfk EtnIrf ekaDkfk,
KAbnft ;[ipfp<kfkayf na[f ekawfcmf tygfk,
+nijmakva?+, nI vagfki `Rnft,
;pfEpaT Et[lflva klnfTvidfdayf,
;[f{ma kckfKmf EtnIrf?

kviAt MFtfT
na[f kapi klnfT vr,
k]f vizikfkamEl ;[f{mf nI ;Rkfk,
kabfB u[f Ekcmf kAlkfkibEt,
kv[mayf mI]fDmf na[f Eparftftivid
kapi ~bipfEpa[T.
;tftA[ kviAtkqf '[kfK kiAdkfKmfEpaT
na[f `tftA[ kapi Pd EpadmadfEd[a '[f[?

`Lvlk `vcrgfkqf, nmf
`[fbadgfkAq ~kfkirmikfKmf
`nft EvAqyiLmf,
`zkiyli[f T\vAl
`FkfkF nmkfKqf
viAttfTpf Epavayf nI.

;nftiypf ep]fkqf EcAlkqalf YMFy<mf,
YMdamEl vidfDpf EpaKmf
`nft prprpfp< pirEtctftilf,
na[f u[fA[ kdkfKmf cmylAb k]gfkqilf,
oR ciB KBmfp<kfK,
nI ekaDkfKmf cpftmf,
ci}gfkla, clipfpa?

kaAlpfepaZtilf
va]likfKmf, vae[alikfKmf ndnft y<tfttftilf,
u[f virlf `lflva
~pfk[f `pfpaviAypf Epalf madfFkfeka]fdT.
;pfpFtfta[f nI cAmpfpayf '[fbalf
na[f pdfF[i ;RnfTvidfDpf EpakiEbE[.

`Lvlk `Ztftmf tagfkMFyamlf
~Cvacpf pDtftikfekaqfq evqiEy vRkiEb[f,
*~rkfkiqf EvAl ecyfy madfEdgfKTda*
Enbfbirv< eca[f[ wapkmf vRkibT.
`vcrmayf `AzkfkiEb[f u[fA[,
hEla Pd ecalflamlf
*tiRdfD tmf `Fkfkibya, kIEz EpaD* '[fkibayf.
'[ udli[f 'nft paktftilf
u[f k]fA] AvtftiRkfkibayf, ecalfliviEd[f.

(u[fA[) cI]fFpf parfpftbfkak
ciB ciB epayfkqf ecalfkiEb[f.
AndfF Epadfd ptfrkaqiyayf
tAlyA[ Vlmf Akyilf "nfTkibayf.
`Dtft cil nimidgfqilf
`nft `Ab MZvTmf
partirajavi[f ev]f]aAd EtvAtkqf
pwfC uRvtftil pbnfT eka]fFRkfkibarfkqf.

*nitftmf nitftmf '[fA[ niA[tfTkf eka]fFRpfpaya?*
'[kf EkdfDvidfD
'[f emq[mf k]fD MAbkfkibayf.
EkqfviEy tvbak ;RkfAkyilf
ptilf 'gfK ecalfvT?
mbnftalf `lflva niA[kfk Ev]fDmf.

N\lBnft pdfdmayf
'[kfKqf na[f `BnfT Epakib EpaT,
'tftA[ MAb ekatfti[aLmf
pbAvyi[f mIT
p<[f[Ak p>kfkAq mdfDEm ecariy<mf
mrmayf nI.

ovfevaR MAby<mf EvtA[kfkdlilf
YMzfki na[f vRmf EpaT,
`nft upfp< nIArkf kZv<mf
ubfcak mRnfT 'Tv<mf
mAbtfT AvtftiRkfkibaya,
u[f MnftaA[kfKqf?

`nft ;Amprpfpi[f
kR vAqytfTkfKqf
'[f katlf madfFkfeka]fdtayf
na[f ktBmf EpaT,
kqfq ciripfepa[fB utirftfT
kv[iyamlf Epaki[fbayf.

;ybfAk vli u[fA[
;mfcikfKmf nadfkqilf
p>tfT, mBnaqf vtgfkiy mlfliAkyayf
'[f mFyilf twfcmf `AdAkyilf,
;vfvqv< epriy KznfAtAy TvdfDmf
;ybfAk Emlf Ekapmayf vRkibT.

pkfktfT manilgfkqf ptvicayf tiRd,
mi[fcarmf ;lflamlf Epa[
caygfkal tmizkmf.
obfAb emZKvrftftiAy OFyaF EtDki[fbayf.
;r]fD k]fkqilf AvtfTkfeka]fD
'gfK ta[f EtDvaEya.

'nft uriAmkfkak
'lfElaRmf EparaDki[fb[rf?
'[kfka[At 'lflaEm 'DtfTkf ekaqfEq[f,
na[f *p[f[Ira* kEv
;RnfT vidfDpf EpakiEb[f.

klfya[ naqf parftfT
kDpfpFkfKmf EvAlkqf.
nI katftiRpfpayf
kv[mf ;Rkfktfta[f ecyfkibT.
ktv< tibnftv<d[f
kDkayf evFpfpaEya,
klkfktfTd[f NAzkiEb[f.
*;[fA[kfK ;lfEl[f[a '[f[,
'lfla naQmf nmT taE[*
;tma[ ciripfpalf ;tymf tZv<kibayf.
k]fFpfpayf nI cracriyilfAl.

priC '[f[ Ev]fDmf?
pl naqf EkdfFRkfkiEb[f.
`nft obfAb YRpaAytf tvir EvEbTmf
uRpfpFyayf Ekdfktf etriyata u[kfK?

p<ritLmf, `bitLmf
u[f p<[f[Ak o[fB mdfDEm.
;[f{mf 'vfvqv< kalmfta[f ~Kmf
u[fA[ MZtayf p<rinfTekaqfq?

AkkfK 'dfDmf T\rtftilf
nmkfKqf kqvad epaRqf ;RnfTmf,
u[f Akvirlf kFkfKmf mkizfcfci
'nft k[f[kfEkalf tnfTviDmf?

;r]fdayf Epa[ vazfkfAk.
;ylfp< o[fbayf,
'tirfparfpfp< o[fbayf.
`TvAr ;nftkf k[v<kqf prmCkmf.

 

COMMENTS

Do I even need to say that you have done a great job.. Excellent work and an incredible usage/selection of words to deliver what you have felt for this one lucky woman of your dreams.. as usual, you have delievred all you feel about this woman in those beautiful words.. I wish I could sit down and translate all your poetry into a language thats more Universal than being confined to the literary ranks of Tamil..I should atleast take a good shot at doing one of your poetry and send it to my friend (you can call her as a GF and say that its an inspired tranlation of your work) .. anyways, beyond doubts, you have this gift for words .. so keep delivering and we earthlings that know this fine language will be glad to extract the essences of those deliveries you make.. Great work and keep it up.. that sums up my comments on your work..
With warmth, ANAND
P.S: Though its none of my business, I'm just curious to know whether you are still in touch with this Girl you have referred in your poetry..If she is real, Why don't you brief me a bit about this so called LOVE OF YOUR LIFE.. I'll be happy to know more about her..

 

Kavingare, Unmayay sollunga , are u married or not ??
Padikum podu Manirathnam padam paartha madiri irukku.
Migavum arumai. Vaarthaigal , each and everyone of them are really chosen ones.
The usage is very very powerful. I am seeing a change in your writing these days. The thoughts and usage , sounds as that of a matured writer.
"Sooriyanukke paatham sudum oru Kodai"
"Ipodu thenallava kalandu vittai "
"mudhal sambalath thethikaaranin santhoshamaval" are a few notable ones.
Kadaisiyil migavum arumagaya mudithulleergal. "iyalbu onrai, ethirpaarpu onrai , athuvarai iintha kanavugal parama sugam " - very true.
Varushathhukku onnu ezhuthame , adikadi ezhuthunga.
Rgds, Anzer

 

hi aathma, I have to appreciate about the expectations you made, the movement i saw your mail about kavithai, the first thing i did was, went to the site and read the kavithai inspite of all other project higher priority mails.
About kavithai, it is simply superb ...especially the para starts with eeyarkai vali unnai .... is really great.It shows the care you give for your 'DREAM GIRL'.
But one question, why are you looking for other girls to get marry? what about your kavithai girl???
priyangaludan, rathna.

 

Great Mukund.. It was really, really fantastic!! Miga neelamaana kavidhai, irundhaalum salippu thatta villai.. Keep them coming!! Cheers, Chakra.

 

hi mukund, how are you? ungal"Aval"(!) kavithai kanden. rasithu ezhuthiyirukireerkal. really nice. 'kannin karu vazhayathul mattikondu katharumbothu.. marakizhaiyil paduthirunthu kanavu kaanum situation ,munthanaikul oazhithu vaitha marunthu ... innum anaithu varikazhum azhakaka ulathu. ungal Aval,vasika sugamaka irrukiral. enn iniya parattukal. regards, thenchittu.

 

"inthe kavingar ku coffe pidikkumaa illa tea pidikkumaa nu oru santhegam .." "ethirpaarpu ondru..ilaylbu ondru..ethu varinum aetru kolven.." wow .. Aval kavithai ROMBA nalla irukku. -- Meena.

 

Anbu naNparukku, Nalam, Naadalum athuvae !
UngaL kavai kaNdaen, Mika siRappaga irukkiRathu ... mikavum rasiththu padiththaen, Kadaisi variyai vaasiththu mudikkaiyil ungaLmael ezuntha poRaamai rompa nijam - oru nuNNiya uNarvaiyum vittuvaikkaamal aRputhamaay ezuthiyirukkiReerkaL ! Vaarththathi thaervu and kavithai sollum nikazhvukaL ellaamee paasaangu illaatha iyalpu - ippadippatta kaathal kavithiakaLai yathaarththaththudan ezuthuvathu mika kashtam - saathiththirukkiReerkaL !VaazhththukkaL naNparee !
Kavithai rompa neeLamaay irukkiRathu - Dhinam Oru Kavithaiyin aLavaivida 3 allathu 4 madangu athikam and I DON'T WANT TO EDIT this kavithai and publish which will spoil the Jeevan in the kavithai ! EndRum Anbudan, Nagas

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