etaAlnfT EpaE[amf... (15/06/2002)    Read Comments

Thozhamaikku, Vanakkam!! kavithaiyil aethenum puthithaai(vithyaasam aanathaai) seyya vendum endru ninaithen. Ennakku therintha varai kalaviyai (sex) muzhuthaai (thodakkam muthal mudivu varai) sollum kavithai ethuvum illai endre ninaikiren. (irupin theriya paduthavum). kayitrin mel nadakum kaariyam thaan ithu. konjam vilaginaalum virasamaai poga koodum endru bayanthu konde ezhuthinen. ilai marai kaai marayaai, oru aanum pennum koodum inbathai vivarikka muyandru irukiren. appadi thaan ullathaa enbathai, mun epothum polave olivu maraivu illaamal thangalin karuthai sollavum. anbudan, Mukund. P.S. kavithaiyil ulla vivarangal ellam ... kandathum, kettathum matrum karpanaiyum mattume :) anubavamum irunthu irunthaal kavithai innum nandraaga vanthu iruku mo ennavo??

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COMMENTS

Yabba, Padu bayangara romance mood-la irundhu irukkeer pola ! Ore oru danger enna theriyumaa ? Sex-la imagination adhikamaa pochu-naa practical-aa kashtamaa irukkumaam. Because reality won't substitute the imagination and we would get upset it seems, LOL. Nalla vaarththai prayogam and good luck. Cheers Muthu.

 

Wow! really great!! But don't tell me that this is the experience from last atlanta trip. Shan

 

wow wow wow, wonderful kavithai, en kai thattalgal :) kanavu vazhiyae kadhal seithom romba nalla word selection. some times audience....appadiye malachu poi iruppanga illa? Athu maathiri ungal kavithai-i padichuttu...appadiye asanthu poi utkarnthu irunthen... Your kavithai was wonderful. Meena.

 

Nanba Kavithai Pramatham. Andha Kannavu Loga Sthree Unnakku thuNaiviyaga Vazthukkal. vayu - kku kkuda vazhi vidatha antha nerukkam arputham.. Ungal sevai thodara Vazthukkal. anbudan Mukunthan.

 

Nalla muyaRchi naNparee - ithu pondRa kavithai ethanaiyum vaasiththathaay ninaivillai - virasam uNdupaNNaamalthaan ezuthiyirukkiReerkaL - kayitRinmael siRappay nadanthathaRku paaraattukkaL ! Ithanai oru kavithai enkiRa vithaththil paarkkumpothu sila vaarththai amaippukaLum, varNanaikaLum arumaiyaay vanthirukkiRathu - But kavithai solla vantha karuththilirunthu satRee vilakip poyvittahtaay ninaikkiRaen - intha vishayaththai sollum kavithai innum, innum azuththamaay irunthida vaeNdum enpathu en ethirpaarppu - inthak kavithai antha nookkaththilirunthu konjam vilakip poyvittahtaal, kadaisiyil vedikkaik kavithai pol aagivittathu :-( Innum azuththamaana, muzumaiyaana oru kavithai intha vishayaththil ezuthap padalaam enpathee en nambillai - ungaL muyaRchi nallathu, aanaal muzumaiyanaathaay illai :-(. InthamuRai UngaL KavithaikaLaip pirasurikka iyalaamaikku varunthukiRom, Thodarnthu muyalungaL, vetRi Nichchayam ! Thodarnthu EzuthivaarungaL ! EndRum Anbudan Nagas (For 'Dhinam Oru Kavithai' YahooGroup)

 

Mukund, Good morning.. Just had a chance to read this KAVIDHAI mail that you sent a while ago.. yet another killer delivery from your end.. and you sure have maintained the code of decency and have walked along the THIN RED LINE that seperates vulgarity and divinity of love making .. it sure is a wonerful feeling to relate to this .. but at the same time I'm surprised to see the way you related to such fine feelings of love and love making without experiencing it .. good work.. will catch you soon.. With warmth ANAND

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